What do you think of the beginning of my story?

I love it so far. The idea of suspense in the paragraph is a good idea and the detail is great as well. I believe in the second paragraph that the dialogue should be spaced more as dialogue and their should be a little more detail, i.e. what color were the sheets? And you walked down what kind of hall towards what kind of room? How did Skylers hand feel? In my opinion, this adds more to the story as a building up to certain points. Their are some grammar errors in the second paragraph but I love the use of big words. The names are catchy to me and brought me to love this beginning more. Although the first paragraph doesn't really explain much to me about the protagonist or their life and neither does the second which I kind of like but I believe that somewhere along the third paragraph you should start to put little things about the protagonist in their i.e. that's my mom, her name is ____ ; being [age] has it's ups and downs ; _____is my favorite movie and everyone who knows me knows that, etc.. I don't yet know the plot but I hope to find out soon. Keep posting more about this soon-to-be novel because I want to hear more about it. Have fun writing. =]