URGENT! Opinions needed on short story! Please read and comment :]?

I'd love to read the rest. It's pretty amazing. She would be in 7th grade though. Very very interesting. Sounds like someone in the age range of 13-17 wrote it. It was really good. I would love to hear/read it if you finish(: just email me the title. I really don't know a good one. Maybe something that is the total opposite of the book. Something lovely or great. :) good luck